The car crash
It was the morning of Thursday 23rd November and I woke up at the crack of dawn.
I was ten years old and feeling very excited as today was going to be a very good day or was it.
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Today my favourite uncle was going to be taking me out for the day and when my uncle takes me out he really takes me out because, with him you never know where your going but it always turns out to be great. My uncle has taken me almost everywhere a little kid could possibly want to go the circus, funfair and numerous theme parks such as Chessington. So to wonder where he was gonna take me next, left me full of anxiety and excitement.
Everything I done that morning was done quick and in a hurry as I rushed myself to get dress and was downstairs within an instance. My mum wondered what was wrong with me she had never seen me like that before and commented by saying ‘he’s like a car with no brakes’ as I remembered the phrase correctly.
I tried to have something to eat but was stopped by the excitement, which filled me; I didn’t feel the least bit hungry. I was bored and tired of waiting time was going slow, very slow as if the time which my uncle was going to reach at my house for was never going to come. So I wandered desperately looking for things of which I could occupy myself with to pass the time but nothing seemed to work. Time slowly went by like a camel tracking through the Sahara dessert and all I could do is wait.
Thirty minutes later than expected, there was a loud knock at my front door finally it was my uncle he had arrived. ‘Finally’ I said to myself my uncle had managed to get here and it was about time to. He stood firmly at the edge of my doorway as if he had enjoyed making me wait. ‘Hello G’ he said to me proudly with a big smile ‘where have you been’ I said furiously ‘I got caught in traffic, anyway I’m here now’ he said good bye to my mum and we were off.
The moment I got into my uncle’s car I couldn’t wait to leave I was jumping around and shouting with excitement: ‘when are we gonna get there, how long is it gonna take and where are we going’. My uncle was becoming annoyed as I constantly kept asking him question after question after question until he swung his head round with veracious force and said ‘shut up!’ I then sat silently frightened to even breathe a word. Just watching as we past building after building at top speed, it was as if I had made my uncle angry causing him to push he’s foot down on the accelerator and make the car travel at a high speed I was feeling frightened.
The journey now pressed on and I was feeling very bored so I started to dose off a little as I felt the sleep coming upon me when suddenly ‘bang’. I felt my whole body fly forward as my weight crashed onto the seat in front of me. I sat silently in shock wondering what had happened but then it hit me we had crashed. I heard the car door open and my uncle walked out screaming and shouting at the top of his voice, he was very angry that his car had been crashed into as I could hear the fire in his voice he was absolutely furious at what had happened. I could not believe it and just sat there tucked away in the corner, scared and full of shock.
Minutes past and my uncle was still outside shouting away but his voice had seemed to have quietened down a bit and things seemed to have swiftly become quiet so I slowly pocked my head out of the window to glance at what was going. My uncle was at the front of the car with the man who crashed into him talking calmly it seemed as though things had calmed down a little but I could still see the anger in both men eyes. But finally it was over and they both returned back to their cars. When my uncle stepped back into the car he slammed the door with authority and great strength as the whole car shook strongly as if it were ready to tip over by the force of the slam.
My uncle reacted very angrily to the crash as he could not believe what had happened. I reacted frightenedly as I could not believe what had happened and because of the fact that every one was angry. But I was mainly frightened as I felt the crash may have very well been my thought due to my annoyance. But this crash is one experience I will never forget.
I never did find out where were going