Memory Impairment Essay ReviewThe article about Memory Impairment is very informative although at times, it is very fast in explaining some terms and the different diseases associated to memory impairment. The whole research is informative in the sense that in few paragraphs, it named around 6 diseases and it showed some important signs but, with these diseases in just few paragraphs, there is a little chance of understanding the essay fully because the thoughts are limited and it has nothing to add except some signs and meaning.
Furthermore, the construction of the whole essay is very simple to the point that it is not quite easy to understand since there are no indentions and all ideas are squeezed in just one paragraph. The flow of information is very tight that the reader will not be able to imagine the descriptions; instead, the information in the essay will only give visual illustrations of the text and leave nothing in the imagination of the reader.With regards to the content of the essay, as mentioned in the above paragraph, it is informative but it does not give too many information. Its content is limited that it is not easy to differentiate one from the other.
There is a difficulty in knowing what the differences of the diseases are and it will not add too much information to the reader.All in all, although it gives new knowledge, it lacks proper structure and transitions of sentences. The idea of squeezing all the data in just one paragraph crowded the whole article and in the end, it gives neither positive nor negative feedback from the reader. It will not give a clear definition of the disease and it will not educate the reader about memory impairment.
It will only provide hints but not full enlightenment regarding the topic. The article will only give a little information and somehow, because of the other disease, it will not be too much to differentiate and compare the remaining others.
