Music Is My Life- an Understatement

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The greatest thing that can happen to a person’s life is to discover what his true purpose is.  I discovered mine at an early age.

I feel fortunate and blessed to uncover the real meaning of my existence.  I know I am in this world for a reason and that is to touch people through the wonderful art of music.  I am most happy when I hear melodies.  Life is a melody.

If you learn to sing its tune you will survive.  I wish to further pursue my passion in music.  I desire to study in America and expand my rich musical history.  I learned to play the piano, violin, and traditional Korean flute when I was yet an elementary student.

I was mesmerized by the beauty of the sound these instruments create.  It was pure bliss to discover what each musical instrument can produce.  I was always overwhelmed with pleasant anticipation to master each one of them and came up with my own melodies. I played the piano during our special musical presentation in junior high school.

I did not limit myself to playing instruments as I realized my own voice is a wonderful musical instrument too.  I joined the choir and found out I can sing as well as I can play the piano.  I also tried acting classes to learn how to connect with my emotions and channel them into art.  I decided to major in popular music and started composing pieces.

After graduating, I resumed my studies at a music institute where I learned to appreciate jazz and honed my singing skills.  I tried my luck and participated in several competitions. I also auditioned for entertainment agencies.  I sang in clubs.

For two amazing years I taught children at the piano institute.  It was a pure delight to impart my knowledge in music.  I was fortunate enough to be mentored for the next six months by a popular Korean composer.  I was chosen as one of the back-up singers for a famous Korean pop icon during his highly successful concert.

I love to create music, sing them, and play instruments.  My ultimate dream is to become a successful singer/songwriter.  I wish to fulfill this dream through my studies in America.  Music is my life.

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