A Letter to My Dear Friend

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Hello Friend, I have decided to write a letter to you about drinking, which I didn’t think I would have to do. Anyway let’s start. Drinking is very dangerous if you consume a lot. You can have liver damage, brain damage and many other problems that will eventually lead to death. When you drink you could get into a car with a complete stranger and they could start driving under the influence of alcohol, which can result into a car crash which could take your life.

Anything could happen when you’re under the influence of alcohol. You then start to become dependent on alcohol as well, making your life seem ‘better’. Another thing about drinking is that you can become really depressed when you drink it, which could lead to suicide. You can become angry when you get drunk which can lead to violence and someone might die from your own stupidity. You can shorten your life by just drinking a drink.

Don’t go drinking at a bar in the middle of the night because a stranger could come up and do anything to you and you might not be able to do anything because your reflexes aren’t great and are extremely slow because you’re drunk. Do you want to be stupid and get into a car with someone who’s drunk and driving the car? Do you want to kill someone because they looked at you funny when you were drunk? Do you want to be caught over the influence when you’re driving? No you don’t. That’s why you should never drink unless you want to endanger your health. This is for your own good. Think before you drink.

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