The PIE paragraph model has greatly helped me in developing paragraphs that are reasonable and logical. Prior to learning about the PIE paragraph model, I would blindly and haphazardly approach my writing process. After being given a topic, I would briefly consider what it entailed and then proceed to write without any organization. As a result, my paragraphs would lack persuasion and focus. Furthermore, I would often neglect to revise my work, resulting in the presence of fragment sentences and run-ons that would only be identified when my teacher marked them with a large red X.
Upon discovering the concept of the PIE paragraph model, I recognized the ease and organization it brought to my writing. Now, when presented with a topic, my first step is to conduct a brainstorm or free write to gather all pertinent information and words. Subsequently, I ensure that my chosen point of focus is neither too broad nor too narrow for the paragraph. To support my analysis, I place relevant examples immediately following the point. Nevertheless, a single example often lacks the persuasive power needed to reinforce the point.
In order to make the paragraph more impactful, I needed to provide two or three necessary examples. However, merely giving examples was not enough to support my point. I also had to establish a connection between the point and the information by explaining their relevance. For me, explanations were the crucial component of the paragraph and deserved more attention. Without a strong explanation, the paragraph would resemble a story that requires the reader to decipher my intended message.
