A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Over the past few decades, the exploitation of animals (it) has become a matter of concern (to stop the exploitation of animals). A few people believe the same importance as humans whereas others think animals should be used to meet our needs. This essay will discuss both views and I will conclude with my personal belief. We are living in a highly civilized society which is why it is vital to treat animals like human beings. Studies have revealed that animals have feelings and it is painful for them when one of their group members is killed due to human activity (ies.) For instance, In India, people kill elephants to make jewelry from their inappropriate teeth, and therefore this type of brutality needs to be completely stopped.
We cannot deny the fact that medical science has (been) developed a lot through experiments on animals. Doctors and scientists have created many medicines to treat human diseases. Not only that they have played important role in the production (to produce variety) of food, clothes, and cosmetics. However, in the past, we have used (employed) animals for our ends (to match our needs) due to a lack of technology. Nowadays, we can generate effective medicines through herbs, and also human stem cells of (human body) are (being) used for research purposes. Consequently, animals do not need to suffer anymore to fulfill our requirements. To conclude, it is apparent that we need to stop the exploitation of animals as we can avoid it with our modern technology. To stop it altogether it needs the joint efforts and consolidation of the government and people. In my view, we should take rapid steps towards the welfare of animals.
This is well-argued – just a few grammar points left. Academic writing will use simple tenses more than any other one
