Present a clear position throughout the response 3. Present, extent and supports main ideas, but there may be a tendency to over generalize and / or supporting ideas may lack focus Coherence and cohesion 1. Logically organizes Information and Ideas; there Is clear progression throughout. 2. Sees a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under/over use {Due to owing to} {there fore there by accordingly consequently} {derived from stem from contribute to relegate from} Lead to/result In/result from/ attribute to [be responsible for/be blamed for] [whilst/while nonetheless, nevertheless, despite-in spite of, regardless of, albeit, notwithstanding [further more , moreover, as well, additionally, in additionally The short story “Twins” is written by Eric Wright.
Initially, the short story seems a bit confusing, but when you read the whole story again, it will give you a better understanding of what It is all about. This is the detective novel. In the next few paragraphs, the short story summary, will give readers a better understanding of how this story is all about. The story was in the sass’s, the place is in Toronto, Detroit and Sturdy all at different times in the story. Have a husband and his wife taking a trip and they live in the motel. At the beginning they are mood is dark and terrible.
The husband said the sky Is gray. I think this reflect his mood Is terrible. In the short story Is “Twins,” by Eric Wright. It’s a mystery story. This story Is very mysterious. At the beginning of short stories “Twins,” the characters and what kind of story will reveal its main idea. This is the story of an event becomes complex, a bit difficult to understand, because the way you see the story of S is to change. In the Tory of the conflict / problem emerge. Basically, the story Is about a married couple, the husband likes to draw out his story, saying them to his wife.
One day, he tried to use what had happened, he made up the story to kill his wife, but there is a twist that his wife killed him There are two narrative styles between the two parts of the short story “Twins”. It begins by the husband telling his wife about the plot. And then the plot actually carrying through. The second part of the story is where the plot carries out. Everything the husband described to his wife about his crime novel was actually hat he was going to do to her. At the start of the novel, the wife did question him a lot.
This lead to the plot being real, and working out In their lives. It was effective to show that the plot was not confusing, and could work out in the real world. Having the two different narrative styles throughout the short story “Twins” was effective in that it gave the reader an outcome they were not expecting as well as a twist that made each part work together. I Like it, because the plot Is good. The story Is breathtaking and mysterious. But I don’t Like It, because the plot is woeful and unhappy. I also don’t like the fact that it’s between husband and wife.
I thought this 1 OFF description of the setting sun and the mineshaft and it had a strong conclusion. However the ending was a little confusing when stating Hardy’s wife was successful in murdering her husband. In the beginning of the story she is portrayed as simple minded, or passive. But when she ends up murdering her husband, she shows little remorse and is seen as ruthless, and plotting, but still somewhat hopeful that she was wrong. Hardy’s character was very plotting, however he severely underestimated his wife.
