I read in some place that a perfect world is a single panel to be painted about how someone is dreaming to live in a world without pain and sadness and where all of our dreams come true. People dream about a perfect world and did do nothing to change the world there that we they have! Maybe I will live in a better world in a few years if the people learn how to not be selfish. As well a A world where people won’t be as materialistic as now-a-days, where people are kind and respect each other would be ideal to me. In a perfect world the violence will not exist and there will be less fewer reasons for sadness. Maybe the this world will be not exist the way there that I wish, but I can still have a dream about it. I heard that the perfect world will be a place where people will care about each other and give less value to acquiring materialistic possessions.
Efforts in taking care of each other will be done because in a perfect world people are not perfect, but they can have a different attitude to make the world better. In my opinion, people can wish to acquire materialistic possessions but this will be a part of happiness not the total. Would it not be great if everybody could have all materials goods? However, they will never let those things be more important than their relationships with who???. I do not mean that people cannot have those things, but they just will not only be focused on reaching it and forgetting to be pleasant. Being gentle and , considering the way people are must be part of the world, perfect or not. Societies could should improve their relationship by concerning the choices that individuals made.
Now-a-days societies do not respect anything and it will would be a dream if we lived in a world where people cared about nature, animals, traffic, and the private life of others. For sure there is not a perfect world, but we could be better in this one part to gain and show how the life lives and the people in the world could be happier. Living in a world free of violence will be possible if the society learns to respect others as themselves and show empathy towards others. There are many situations that bring sadness to our lives; such as crime, death, and war affecting us. A perfect world will be a place better if it had people who were in consequence of empatheticy to to others and not egoistic people. That does not means that people will not be sad anymore, but at least the world will be more pleasant to live in.
A world where the violence does not exist will be a dream, a fairytale, and truly a perfect world. If the world had the above 3 parts, it This will bewould be close to the world that I wish for. I know there is no way that the perfect world could exist, but I know we can still do something to improve the world that we have. We can fantasize about many things that we need to developing to have a better place to live, but all this improving will depend on how much effort we are able to make to reach those dreams. All the changes that need to be done depend only on us. In conclusion, a perfect world would be a fairytale, a place where peace is the queen, and the society would understand each other with empathy. Very Good Job!
This is much clearer and you have given lots of detail. Remember that when you are talking about something as a generalization, you do not have to include an article.
